Rebelkit - EchoClan

[xXBadgerXx]

Why do we all f i g h t for life when it's w orth l e s s?

Name: Rebelkit / Rebelpaw / Rebel???

Gender: Male 

Age: 3 Moons

Clan: EchoClan 

Position: Kit

Quick Description: A medium brown mackerel tabby with creamy amber eyes and a skinny build.

Description: Rebelkit is a short haired brown tabby with black stripes. He has creamy amber eyes. His legs are very long and lanky, making him look like a foal at birth. He has a dark pink nose outlined in black. Rebelkit has no other markings other than a white muzzle that only reaches to the tip of his nose. His eyes usually look like he is spaced out, even if he is not. Rebelkit has bolder stripes closer to his tail-tip. He has brick red paws that are slightly darker then his nose.


Personality: Rebelkit is very independent, but he really wants to be a leader of something one day. He likes to boss people even if he isn't in charge, but he won't participate in any activities with his "peasants." When anyone approaches him, clan member or not, he will either act bossy or like a show-off. If they don't answer the "right" way, he'll start to annoy them into playing his game. He has a habit of licking his chest when annoyed. He has a soft spot for silver-blue tabbies, and will try to show off "kindly" for them. He also uses others as his stepping stones, so that others could like him, but it isn't going very well for him.

Skills: Climbing, fighting, being annoying.


Likes/Dislikes: Likes : Being independent, blue-silver tabbies, being in charge, using others as stepping stones. Dislikes : Being approached often, being annoyed, apprentices.


History: Rebelkit is the average male kit.

Relationships:

Mother - Lilyflower --x--
Father - Charredfur ---x-
Sibling - Scarletkit --x--
Clanmate - Roscuro -x---

Other: I'd like to say, even if Rebelkit uses others as his "servants," he will never become evil.

[Seren♫]

Approved!

Good edits, xXBadgerXx! You are now free to RP Rebelkit! Countinue to develop his history as your begin RPing. :)

Approval Pending!

This is a very nice start, xXBadgerXx! However, there is quite a few changes I'd like to see you make before I accept Rebelkit :3

Kit biographies are always a bit complicated, at least in my opinion. For starters, they are just kits and new to life, so it is almost impossible to say what their personality is. This being said, it should not be left blank nor undeveloped. As a RPer you decide from birth how your character will act, so Personality, no matter the age of your character should always be a known factor and should always be explained in full detail.

As for the other fields, they should not be neglected either. The Description section is greatly lacking as are the skills and Relationships sections. For your description you should try to describe your markings clearly. You've selected an excellent photo, so I suggest trying to turn that photo into words. For example, you may start off by saying that Rebelkit is a black and cream colored cat with amber eyes(I suggest this as your Quick Description). You also mention that Rebelkit is a tortie, I assume you meant tortoiseshell, however, it is unlikely, if not impossible for male cats to be tortoiseshells. Here at HITSv2 we don't permit them at all.

As for his skills section, you should select one or two skills your character will eventually process and excel at. As for the Relationships section you should add his mother and father here, and not in the History section. As for his kit-status, his history is sufficient as there is not much to go off of.

If you need extra help, always refer to the Biography Tutorial as your first resource!

When you have made these changes I will be happy to accept Rebelkit! ^^