Drippingcloud [Finished]

[Eternal Snow]

Name: Drippingcloud

Gender: She- cat

Age: 28 moons

Clan: HiddenClan

Position: StarClan Warrior

Quick Description: Blue-grey tabby she- cat with blue- green eyes.

Description: Drippingcloud is a swift blue- grey tabby she- cat with  with blue- green eyes. Light grey stripes mark her ears , as well as her back, paws, and tail. She has a muscular build, and is somewhat slim. She has a small scar hidden by her neck fur, inflicted by a previous quarrel with Fallenpaw. A heart- like symbol is marked in her chest fur, and circle  markings are placed underneath her right emerald eye.   

Personality: Drippingcloud is a very loyal and loud cat. She would do anything believed to benefit her clanmates. She has a bit of a temper, ready to fight back harshly if she feels challenged. She can be quite competitive, always trying to be the best and most respected. Although she may never admit it to anyone, she loves to fight. A good challenge can be one of the only things that can put her in a good mood. All together she is a caring and hardheaded cat that will always be there to support and help her friends.

Skills: Fighting, teaching, climbing, and negotiating
Weaknesses: Swimming, emotions, and leadership    

Likes/Dislikes:

Likes- Fighting, talking with friends, mice.
Dislikes- Being wrong, and having to do anything with herbs.

History:

Kithood
Drippingcloud was born to Dappledrose, with her littermates, Etherealwish and Cedarwhisker. Her best friends at the time were Nightkit and Shrewkit. As a kit, she hoped to be a medicine cat, but she quickly let go of the idea when Nightkit passed away.

Apprenticehood
  She let go of the dream of becoming a medicine cat, and went on to continue the journey to warriorship by becoming an apprentice. Her mentor was Purplesparks, who never actually trained her, and her sister started her separate journey in life as a medicine cat apprentice. This began to separate the two, although they did make efforts to stay close. Drippingcloud began to train in the Dark Forest, after convinced that she needed to expand her knowledge and strength in training.

Warriorship
Drippingpaw soon received the name Drippingcloud, and went on in life to become the best warrior she could be. Many problems came almost as soon as she became a warrior, her sister and herself were getting involved in nasty fights, each cat trying to throw as many insults as they could at the other. Even when they were fighting, Drippingcloud still felt the need to protect her sister, no matter what.
  Drippingcloud had actually tried to drown her sister once, out of the rage, and anger at what she told her. Many other problems followed, due to how brash Drippingcloud was. As if things couldn't get any worse for her, the deaths began. First Applethorn, then Cedarwhisker, Cherrybliss, and Dappledrose. It seemed as if StarClan had placed a cruel curse on her and her sister. This brought them both closer, despite their differences. Torn by the choice to follow her mentor or to fully gain her sister's trust, she killed Darknight after he had attacked Etherealwish. 
Moon s later, Drippingcloud eventually confronted her sister, swallowing down her pride and apologizing to her for.. everything. Later that day, she was killed by a dog, in a desperate attempt to protect her sister. Although she died in the worst way she could imagine, she died happily, knowing that her death wasn't in vain. .
She spends the rest of her time StarClan, living in a lone oak tree, located near the edge of StarClan. Out of guilt, she doesn't really socialize with the other StarClan warriors, except for her family and close friends.

Relationships:

Father: Ironclaw (alive)
Mother: Dappledrose (deceased)
Grandparents: Pyroflame (deceased) and Tidepool (deceased)
Siblings: Etherealwish (alive), Cherrybliss (deceased), Lemonheart (alive),
Apprentices: Fuzzypaw (alive)
Best Friends: Veiledmoon (alive), Etherealwish (alive)

Word count - 643 words
Notes - All finished :)

[icey]

Approved!
I liked the changes you made, they made the bio much more enjoyable ^^ GJ Something's up with your table though o_o Might wanna look at it....
Pending Approval!

I've always loved Drippingcloud as a character. She's so beautiful and so interesting. It's so sad to see that she died :(

Before I can accept your application, can you add a bit more to the appearance part? Include more about her markings and body shape. You can describe what build she is(lean, muscular, stocky, etc.). Cat's are a lot like humans too. They have a TON of different body types.

Your history seemed a bit short. I know that you and Rish rp'ed quite a lot and I was kind of expecting more to be in the history. If there's more, could you add more to it? :3 You can even take things that happened on tfm and turn them into rp. It'll make the history more full and more interesting.

Also, maybe you could add some things she's not good at?