Autumnkit's Biography || HiddenClan

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AUTUMNKIT || NEW-BORN || ♀ || KIT || HIDDENCLAN

Basic Depiction ||

Autumnkit is a calico that looks almost exactly like her mother, except her fur pattern (ginger, black, ginger) is merely the opposite.

Depiction ||

Autumnkit is a tiny, multi-hued she-cat. Although her patches aren't very visible yet considering she hasn't fully grown, she'll look much like her mother, Cherishhope. Her patches along her spine will be the usual ginger and black of a calico. Her fur would be the average length of medium, although a tad shorter. Her legs would be slightly medium in height and small in width. Her pelt would be nice and shiny, possibly due to her mother being overprotective over it. This temptress's eyes are round and slightly oval-shaped with a triangular edge at the bottom of them. Her oculars are a pretty hue of turquoise or could also be known as "sea-green". Autumnkit's tail is slim and slightly small, which could be a slight disadvantage when climbing trees. Her paw pads are a light pink like her mother's and very soft, so it would be hard to walk on rough surfaces after a while. She has a pretty, dull brown nose speckled with black. Her ears are tipped with the same coal-like hue.

 Pysche ||

Autumnkit has a very colorful array of personality. She's usually very bubbly to those she knows best, not caring what she tells them. She's not very good at keeping secrets, but she loves to gossip and spread rumors. She likes hurting others, a slight trait of her mother, and she likes feeling self-confident. She likes winning and thinking she's the best at anything. She likes to think she can do anything she wants and get away with it, which tends to cause her to get into a lot of trouble then she tends to be in. She doesn't think, she just does it, even if it's wrong. She tends to try to keep herself isolated from those who she doesn't well unless she thinks there's something interesting going on with the group.

Transpirancy ||

• Born 3/5/13
• Became 1 moon old 3/12/13

Considering she was just born, Autumnkit doesn't have very much history yet. This section will have to be a bit empty until she's older.

Prodigy ||

Mother: Cherishhope
Father: Lemurtail
Siblings: Fallowkit, Poppykit, Splashkit
Grandparents: Rainfeather and Francis
Great-Grandparents: Amethystmoon and Ghostfur (both deceased)
Great-Great-Grandparents: Nightmist and Flamepelt (both deceased)

Supplementary ||

None as of the moment.

[⋆ Phia ⋆]

⋆Not yet accepted!

I'll need to have a word with Seren before I can tell you for sure if we'll look past a ban for your character, but until then, you can work on the rest of the changes you'll need to make.

Well, something in there fell a little like an atomic bomb so I can't help but point it out- stretch the page? Stretch the page vertically all you need- that is never a problem. It will become a problem if you stretch it horizontally.

Abuse scrolls in your private roleplays all you want- but we read plenty of apps everyday as well go back to re-check older ones again and again so it would be better if they were straight-forward and easy to read. By shoving your text in a tiny 340x150 scrolling table you're not making our job any easier. I'd like to see your future applications vertically-huge and glorious; you can use a table if you want, even scrolling if you must, but at least make it easy and comfortable to read.

Labels- I'm not sure how "obvious" it is to which clan your character belongs; I want to see it with big shiny letters at the top of your application as well in your title. Fields are there for a reason- don't omit them.

Quick description- The quick description is to be used in the allegiances page. Nobody has a clue what said "Cherishhope" looks like. Get Autumnkit a proper quick description. Pelt colour, gender, eye colour.

Everything else looks very good- Autumnkit sounds like she shall be growing into a pretty interesting character! I'd like to see a Cherishhope with a tiny twist of guilt instead of recklessness! ^-^ Kit applications can of course be shorter and less descriptive than apprentice/warrior ones- you can develop and alter them as your characters age in your Log; Staff will keep track of them and let you know if you need to change something.

Let me know when you've applied these changes!

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