Post by Mustache on Feb 9, 2013 2:34:22 GMT
Hawkscar
~GENERAL INFORMATION~
{Name}:Loki (God of Tricks) > Hawkpaw > Hawkscar
{Name origin}: |Hawk| the animal that made him a clan cat |scar| for the large scars on his back from his kithood
{Gender}: Tom
{Age}: 17 moons
{Clan}: Echoclan
{Position}: Newly appointed Warrior
{Name origin}: |Hawk| the animal that made him a clan cat |scar| for the large scars on his back from his kithood
{Gender}: Tom
{Age}: 17 moons
{Clan}: Echoclan
{Position}: Newly appointed Warrior
~PHYSICAL FEATURES~
{Description}: Hawkscar is a black tabby cat with deep, vivid emerald eyes. His darker tabby stripes curl around his body, face, and tail and end in dark socks on his paws. He also has lighter stripes on his face and some on his slender tail. Around his eyes, is a burnt tan as well as on his chest and tail. The only white on his body is on his chin, a strip on his chest, his ear fur, and at the tip of his tail. He has short whiskers, eyelashes, and as well as fur. His ribs and bones always show through his ruffled fur.
{Build}: Hawkscar’s build includes his broad shoulders that ripple with power. (Pshhh yea...) His ears are coned-shape and are rounded at the tips with a tuff of ebony fur. His powerful hind legs are perfect for climbing in the rocky terrain that he lives in. His large paws and slender body make him good at swimming which he loves to do. But don’t let his size fool you! He is neither a very fast runner nor good at climbing trees.
{Scars}: He has large gashes on his back, a nick in his left ear, and a long, skinny scar on his left hind leg. All of these scars are from the hawk that attacked him.
{Other Description(s)}: Hawkscar was always born with one canine tooth larger than the other. The larger one sticks slightly out of his muzzle and makes eating more difficult. Although, it does provide a better grip on prey since it can hook deeper into his victim. (Ooo scary xD)
~PERSONALITY~
{Good Traits}
[Confident] Hawkscar is always confident. If there's something to say, he'll say it. He isn’t afraid to share what his own opinions are. This makes him a good at leading cats in patrols.{Bad traits}
[Protective] When Hawkscar has a relationship with someone, he often tries to keep it. He can be over-protected sometimes, but he’s only trying to protect his friends and loved ones. He would risk his life for his clan and would rather die then watch them be picked off one by one.
[Fearless,powerful] He isn't afraid to use his claws if he has too. Hawkscar is fearless, brave, and powerful. Yet, sometimes this great amount of strength and fearless attitude can lead him into unnecessary fights.
[Angered easily] He has a bit of anger issues and gets upset easily. He is very sensitive when others talk about him being a kittypet.
[Bully, insecure] He likes to tease and put others down to make himself feel better. He likes to intimidate others. He also blames others for his own crimes and doesn’t like to admit he is wrong. This is why he has so much trouble making friends and can easily find enemies.
[Clumsy, easily distracted] Since he has a fear of hawks, he is simply distracted at even the smallest noises. This also makes him very clumsy because if he looses focus, he will often tumble over roots and rocks, also making hunting hard for him.
~RELATIONSHIPS~
{Parents}: Moon (Mother/Kittypet) and Razor (Father/ Loner)
{Sibling(s)}: None
{Mate}: None
{Kit(s)}: None
{Mentor}: Rockshade (Male/alive)
{Apprentice(s)}: None
{Friends}: None
{Sibling(s)}: None
{Mate}: None
{Kit(s)}: None
{Mentor}: Rockshade (Male/alive)
{Apprentice(s)}: None
{Friends}: None
~HISTORY~
{PART 1}
[Kit]
Hawkscar was born to Moon and Razor in leaf-fall. His father, a rouge, lived near the Echoclan border, and his mother was a kittypet who dwelled in a twoleg nest. After being born, his father left and told Moon to name him Loki, after his own father. Growing up without his father was difficult not knowing any defensive moves or attacks. Loki was very eager to learn new tactics, but his mother didn’t like the idea of fighting. Angered, Loki went to find his father in the woods without letting his mother know, but he was assaulted by a hawk. In a frenzy of claws and talons, the hawk persisted on the attack until Loki clawed the hawk straight in the eye with luck. Limping in the wintry breeze, a young tom, named Mudpelt, found him and took him to his camp.
{PART 2}
[Apprentice]
After he mildly recovered from the attack, he finally stepped out of the so called "Medicine Cat den". He didn't quite understand all the traditions of these feral cats. All he knew was that prey was much better then the slop the twolegs gave him back at home. Whenever he tried to bring up a conversation with the clan cats, they would walk away murmmering "Stupid kittypet". That night, the leader had called him into his den and told Loki that he would leave in the morning because he was causing an uproar with the warriors. Dissapointed, he went to bed dreaming about plump mouses. The next morning, two cats, a warrior and a small apprentice were escorting him back to his home when Hawkpaw heard something rustling further ahead. He told the clan cats that they needed to hide because some twolegs were approaching them. The cats ignored him until they too heard the twolegs. But by then, the twolegs were in their view. The twolegs started to chased them, but the Loki acted quicker. he grabbed the smallest cat (The apprentice) in his teeth and urged the larger one to follow. They pelted through the territory and squeezed their way in between two rocks, slightly scareing a snake that quickly slither out of it's home. Spotting the snake, the twolegs squealed in terror and panicked. After they thanked him, they told Loki that he was worthy to be a clan cat and asked if he would join their clan if asked. He agreed to join Echoclan, and the leader happily recruited him. Loki was later renamed Hawkpaw, for the animal that changed his life. Rockshade, a witty, clever grey tom, took him under his training. Rockshade didn’t treat Hawkpaw like a kittypet. Instead, he pushed Hawkpaw to his own limits which sometimes frustrated Hawkpaw. This often led to quarrels and name calling (Some included “lazy kittypet” and so on). Although they had this on and off relationship, Hawkpaw admired his mentor.
{PART 3}
[Warrior]
After many hard moons of training, Hawkpaw was announced Hawkscar for his “excellent” catch in his assessment. His warrior name bothered him, though. It seemed like no one could get over his kithood. During his vigil, he gazed out into the starstruck night and could only think one thing. Where were his father and mother?
{Role play starts here}
~MISCELLANEOUS~
{Wish}: Hawkscar has always just wanted to see his father. After all, it's what made him a warrior.
{Nightmare}: Hawkscars fears are hawks, being abandoned, and falling off a tree.
{Likes}:
{Dislikes}:
{Wanted Rank}: Deputy (Hawkscar wants to be deputy… I wouldn’t mind… but there might be someone better than me xD)
{Overall Goal}: He wants to be remembered as a warrior and not a kittypet. He thinks that his clanmates always see him as a fat lazy kittypet.
{Hidden Personalities}: Hawkscar has a soft-spot when it comes to kits. When he sees them, his heart swells with joy hoping that one day he with have ones of his own.
{Secrets }: None
{Other}: I made this character a while ago… if you remember… on HC… I twisted his history to be able to be in Echoclan… If it’s okay… If it’s not then please tell me :3 I’ll be glad to fix anything. Also, as I rp, I will add on to friends, dislikes, likes, etc... And thanks Seren for helping me fix this bio! <3
{Nightmare}: Hawkscars fears are hawks, being abandoned, and falling off a tree.
{Likes}:
- Friends
- Fighting
- Swimming
{Dislikes}:
- Betrayals
- Hunting
- Climbing trees
{Wanted Rank}: Deputy (Hawkscar wants to be deputy… I wouldn’t mind… but there might be someone better than me xD)
{Overall Goal}: He wants to be remembered as a warrior and not a kittypet. He thinks that his clanmates always see him as a fat lazy kittypet.
{Hidden Personalities}: Hawkscar has a soft-spot when it comes to kits. When he sees them, his heart swells with joy hoping that one day he with have ones of his own.
{Secrets }: None
{Other}: I made this character a while ago… if you remember… on HC… I twisted his history to be able to be in Echoclan… If it’s okay… If it’s not then please tell me :3 I’ll be glad to fix anything. Also, as I rp, I will add on to friends, dislikes, likes, etc... And thanks Seren for helping me fix this bio! <3
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